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General Category => Poetry => Topic started by: Diane Amberg on June 22, 2014, 10:22:57 AM

Title: More poetry
Post by: Diane Amberg on June 22, 2014, 10:22:57 AM
 A new Haiku.....  Loss of Self and Center

   For what do we cry?
   For the inner sunshine, gone.
   Friends crouch low, hiding.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Catwoman on June 22, 2014, 08:03:23 PM
 :D Good job!!!!!
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Diane Amberg on June 23, 2014, 02:56:02 PM
Thank you. Your turn. They are always so well written.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Catwoman on June 23, 2014, 08:15:10 PM
How about another haiku:

When one more word fails,
And anything more is noise...
Dignity is lost.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Wilma on June 23, 2014, 09:36:34 PM
That is very good.  Could apply to a lot of politicians, too.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Diane Amberg on June 24, 2014, 08:27:59 AM
Good one for sure.As Wilma said ,many applications.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Diane Amberg on June 24, 2014, 12:17:28 PM
     Delightful Sensation

   Stream water sparkles.
   Down the smooth course it hurries.
   Warm cupped hands are chilled.
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Catwoman on June 24, 2014, 07:15:13 PM
 :D Love it!!!
Title: Re: More poetry
Post by: Diane Amberg on June 26, 2014, 07:24:22 AM
       A Sweet Treat

   This Strawberry June
   A pink drop escapes the cone.
   My smiling tongue licks.