something to try.Zip code poems

Started by Diane Amberg, July 30, 2015, 02:32:44 PM

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Diane Amberg

I just learned about this.Write a poem with each line containing the number of words in your zip code.Here is mine.   19711

Garden
Cucumbers twining around and up over my garden fence
Peppers shining like bright red Christmas ornaments
Beans
Bugs

proelkco

I am not a poet but do enjoy reading it.

Bullwinkle

    Summer has become a venerable foe

   the muggy morning is like a blanket

   hard to breathe

   my eyes become blurry

  Yet the cool creek water renews my waining strength.

Catwoman

#3
COOL!!!!!  ;D ;D ;D  You guys rock!!!!  :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:  Here's one...Zip code:  67456

I wished upon the evening star;
Each wish fell short, being too far...
A tear silently fell,
Dripping into the bottomless well
Deepening each day away from you.

Diane Amberg

WOW! There is some talent here. Very good ones.
Pro, try it. It can be free verse and not rhyme.

readyaimduck

I agree ProElkCO.  I am not good at prose.

so....with my 3 beers in me:

Ahem....
The fair is on right now.
I have a goat, pig , cow.
Perhaps I will win the First Prize.
Perhaps I not.
What wonderful event....OMG just WOW!

ready....to put pen up for only writing people off!   lol



Diane Amberg


ddurbin

I'm at a disadvantage.  My zip has two 0's in it.

Diane Amberg

Ok, let's say it can be used as a one. Does that work for you?

readyaimduck

hey durbin:
just say something  that says  'I got nuttin'
It may be 3 words, but it means zilch!  zero, nada, nil, nothing!  lol

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